Positives
- Good editing
- Good camera work on the bag
- Mise en scene is good as the teenager is wearing stereotypical clothes for her age and so is the killer as in films they never show their faces/identities
Negatives
- Use a still image for the end image instead of a moving video as it takes away effect
- The colouring on the video needs to be darker
Jessica Harris // Age 17
Positive
- Camera work and positioning is good
Negatives
- Suggest that you take out the second walking clip so it flows better
- Have writing shown i.e. reviews/storyline


